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People are voting without watching this.

Either I missed something important, or this was total crap. At this rate, I bet this gets through the portal.

btw: for the guy that said the loading screen didn't work, you just have to wait for it to load. Novel idea, huh?

That was pretty good.

The only suggestion I have is:
Compress the video more. It was beautiful at that resolution, but who wants to download that big of a file for just a little flash video?

Looks like the start to a pretty decent animation.

I hope your skill level continues to increase. It shows that you put some work and thought into this one. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you, but save the sticks for your invisible background/frame layer. Also, some texture on the ground would have helped to show your motions.

Liked it better on abs

You should have changed the opening screen so it didn't look like this was stolen. I about filled out a whistle form before I checked your email.

This looks familiar

I've seen this before, I just can't think of where. I'm marking the page, in case I find the other copy somewhere. Maybe I'm just crazy, and this is the firt time I've seen it.

Whack-a-Smith?

Not bad. One suggestion. Don't do the black text over a dark gray background. I could barely read the instructions, and I couldn't find my score. I wouldn't have noticed it if the cursor hadn't turned to the text inserter when I passed over it.